Sunday, January 31, 2010

We Real Yummy

The cold plums.
A few in the Icebox.

We real yummy. We
In your tummy. We

Your breakfast. We
Your past. We

Delicious. We
Nutritious. We

Good Food. We
Conclude.

2 comments:

  1. That was really an entertaining parody of the Brooks. I actually laughed out loud reading it. I like how you use rhymes to add more rhythm to your poem, and your last sentence seems to have a double meaning?

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  2. I really liked your parody, it was a great idea of yours to incorporate Brooks poem structure to yours. Also it is very funny to think the plums are talking to the reader. It was nicely done.

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