The cold plums.
A few in the Icebox.
We real yummy. We
In your tummy. We
Your breakfast. We
Your past. We
Delicious. We
Nutritious. We
Good Food. We
Conclude.
Sunday, January 31, 2010
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Driving everday to UC Davis, with an English class at 8 and don't want to be late? Trying to keep yourself awake while you don't drink coffee? Your new staple breakfast? cereal
That was really an entertaining parody of the Brooks. I actually laughed out loud reading it. I like how you use rhymes to add more rhythm to your poem, and your last sentence seems to have a double meaning?
ReplyDeleteI really liked your parody, it was a great idea of yours to incorporate Brooks poem structure to yours. Also it is very funny to think the plums are talking to the reader. It was nicely done.
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